State the point of the paper (what it is you will be discussing) in one
or two sentences, and do this right at the beginning of the paper (i.e.
within the first couple of sentences). DO NOT write a lengthy intro
including, for example, historical or biographical information about
Simone de Beauvior, or general comments on philosophy or the state of
gender relations.
Follow this up with a "preview" sentence (or two) telling me
exactly what you will cover in the paper and in what order.
Now just do what you said you were going to do in the intro. Always
make it very clear what you are discussing at any given point in the
paper. In other words, think of your paper as having different sections
with different (but related) topics. At the start of a new
"section", plainly announce what you will be discussing in that
section. When you are done with that discussion, explain its relevance
to the topic at hand, and reiterate the point you were trying to get
across in that section. Make sure you stuck to the particular topic you
were discussing in that section, and did not go off on any tangents (if
you bring up another topic because you think it is related to what you are
talking about, make sure you explain the relevance).
At the end of the paper, give a conclusion or summing up of what you’ve
done in the paper, and what the overall point was. Make sure you have done
everything your intro says you’re going to do (if you’ve changed your
mind or added something, make sure you revise your intro to reflect that),
and that you have covered every question asked in the paper topic.
Write as plainly and clearly as possible; don’t think that you have
to use long sentences and big words (with one exception, see below) you
wouldn’t normally use (this tends to make writing worse).
Whenever you use a philosophical term, make sure you explain it.
It can be very helpful to have someone not in our class read the paper;
it will help you identify any points where you’re not being clear.
Carefully proofread your paper (don’t just run it through the spell
check).