PLAGIARISM EXERCISES
READ THE SOURCE PARAGRAPH
BELOW. THEN READ AND ANALYZE
EACH WRITER’S USE OF THAT PARAGRAPH IN THEIR PAPERS.
INDICATE WHETHER THE WRITER HAS COMMITTED PLAGIARISM OR NOT.
IF THE WRITER HAS COMMITTED PLAGIARISM, INDICATE WHY AND HOW
YOU WOULD FIX IT. USE A SEPARATE
SHEET OF PAPER FOR YOUR ANALYSES.
DON’T FORGET TO LABEL EACH ANALYSIS CLEARLY AND TO PUT YOUR NAME ON YOUR
PAPER.
SOURCE:
The importance of
the Second Treatise of Government printed in this volume is such that without
it we should miss some of the familiar features of our own government. It
is safe to assert that the much-criticized branch known as the Supreme Court
obtained its being as a result of Locke's insistence upon the separation
of powers; and that the combination of many powers in the hands of the executive
under the New Deal has still to encounter opposition because it is contrary
to the principles enunciated therein, the effect of which is not spent, though
the relationship may not be consciously traced. Again we see the crystallizing
force of Locke's writing. It renders explicit and adapts to the British politics
of his day the trend and aim of writers from Languet and Bodin through Hooker
and Grotius, to say nothing of the distant ancients Aristotle and the Stoic
school of natural law. It sums up magistrally the arguments used through
the ages to attack authority ! vested in a single individual, but it does
so from the particular point of view engendered by the Revolution of 1688
and is in harmony with the British scene and mental climate of the growing
bourgeoisie of that age. Montesquieu and Rousseau, the framers of our own
Declaration of Independence, and the statesmen (or should we say merchants
and speculators?) who drew up the Constitution have re-echoed its claims
for human liberty, for the separation of powers, for the sanctity of private
property. In the hands of these it has been the quarry of liberal doctrines;
and that it has served the Socialist theory of property based on labor is
final proof of its breadth of view.
WRITER 1
It is not hard to
see the importance of the Second Treatise of Government to our own democracy.
Without it we should miss some of the most familiar features of our own government.
It is safe to assert that the much-criticized branch known as the Supreme
Court obtained its being as a result of Locke's insistence upon the separation
of powers; and that the combination of many powers in the hands of the executive
under the New Deal has still to encounter opposition because it is contrary
to the principles enunciated therein, the effect of which is not spent, though
the relationship may not be consciously traced. The framers of our Declaration
of Independence and the statesmen who drew up the Constitution have re-echoed
its claims for human liberty, for the separation of powers, for the sanctity
of private property. All these are marks of the influence of Locke's Second
Treatise on our own way of life.
WRITER 2
The crystallizing
force of Locke's writing may be seen in the effect his Second Treatise of
Government had in shaping some of the familiar features of our own government.
That much-criticized branch known as the Supreme Court and the combination
of many powers in the hands of the executive under the New Deal are modern
examples. But even the foundations of our state-the Declaration of Independence
and the Constitution-have re-echoed its claims for human liberty, for the
separation of powers, and for the sanctity of private property. True, the
influence of others is also marked in our Constitution-from the trend and
aim of writers like Languet and Bodin, Hooker and Grotius, to say nothing
of Aristotle and the Stoic school of natural law; but the fundamental influence
is Locke's Treatise, the very quarry of liberal doctrines.
WRITER 3
Many fundamental
aspects of our own government are
apparent in the Second
Treatise of Government. One can safely
say that the oft-censured
Supreme Court really owes its existence
to the Lockeian demand
that powers in government be kept separate;
equally one can say
that the allocation of varied and widespread
authority to the
President during the era of the New Deal has
still to encounter
opposition because it is contrary to the principles
enunciated therein
... Once more it is possible to note the way in
WRITER 4
The Second Treatise
of Government is a veritable quarry of liberal doctrines. In it the crystallizing
force of Locke's writing is markedly apparent. The cause of human liberty,
the principle of separation of powers, and the inviolability of private property-all
three major dogmas of American constitutionalism-owe their presence in our
Constitution in large part to the remarkable Treatise which first appeared
around 1685 and was destined to spark, within three years, a revolution in
the land of the author's birth, and ninety years later, another revolution
against that land.